Hard rewrite of your bio

Rewrite the bio below to be:
- Honest about what I've actually done (no inflated titles, no "passionate about" language)
- Specific (one verifiable accomplishment, one concrete recent thing)
- In my voice (read it back to me — would I actually say this out loud?)
- 50% shorter than the original

Cut: "passionate," "leverage," "drive results," "I help [audience] [vague outcome]," any sentence that could apply to 100 other people in my field.

Show me the rewrite. Then show me the three sentences you cut and why.

Original:
[YOUR BIO]